Fella, you've got some nerve calling ANYONE "pretentious".
Mostly, you don't spend any time talking about comics. You spend one tiny paragraph on how visual artists get a bum rap, then go on to talk about Piss Christ for the majority of the article, then give a vague link between it and editorial cartoons and how Piss Christ is better than editorial cartoons, or something. ??
You need to be a little bit less foggy with your future articles, dude. I've read it twice and I still couldn't tell what you were trying to say or even what the point of the whole thing was.